What to improve..

With my crit presentation out of the way here are a few points to focus on :

 

colour render

 

  • make details and textures of my character stand out
  • make clothes part of his body and not a separate thing
  • metallic or copper finish instead of a human-looking colour
  • use electronic symbols for mouth of various parts
  • LED for eyes (red possibly)
  • focus on what middle class would be in my characters world
  • choose a religion or a political affiliation
  • alter PPS to come for characters point of view

 

lets get crackalacking ..

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